Dec 10, 2018

Writing an argumentative essay

I took a class for tenth standard students of Sri Sathya Sai Gurukulam, Rajahmundry on how to write an argumentative essay over Google Hangouts. Here is a version of what I told them - minus the exercises and discussions. 

Before we go into the how of writing an argumentative essay, let's spend some time thinking about why we should learn this skill in first place.

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There are many ways to make your case. Tibetan monks use expansive gestures while arguing.

Why learn how to write an argumentative essay?

Often, when we are with our friends and family, we get what we want by just asking for it. We might ask our friend to help us with our homework. We might ask our parents to take us for a cinema or buy us an ice cream. If they ask why, all we have to do is to give a reason that comes on the top of our minds, and, let's accept it, if they want to do it, they will anyway do it. Just because we asked for it.

As a result, we don't consciously think about how to persuade others, how to make an effective argument or how to present our reasons in a well thought out, structured way. And, we certainly don't take some time off to sit in front of a desk to write it all down. We end up not developing this skill at all.

Yet, this skill is important because it will help us sharpen our thinking, communicate better, and above all persuade others.
We are learning this not just to get good marks in exams, but also because it's going to be useful for our life.

Let's look at the reasons one by one.

First, writing helps us to sharpen our thinking. Writing forces us to think logically. Writing forces us to weed out weak ideas. Writing clarifies our own thoughts. In fact, we learn by writing. We might be thinking that we learn only by listening to others, and by reading books. That's why we come to the classroom, carry our text books around and go to library. However, Peter Drucker, a management guru, says we also learn by writing. For some of us, a subject doesn't go into our heads, unless we write. You have all heard of Nobel Prize for medicine. It goes to scientists who have discovered new things, made amazing contributions. Now we might think that they all scored excellent marks in science subjects - biology, chemistry etc - in their school and colleges. Some of them did. But some of them did not. What they were consistently good at was in essay writing. Atul Gawande a very good cancer surgeon and an excellent writer says it's because writing essays forces you to think clearly, precisely, logically, creatively. And all these help in research.

Second, writing helps us communicate better. I am talking to you right now. Unless you are taking notes, by tomorrow, you are likely to remember only 50% of what I say. By day after tomorrow, you will remember only 20%. In a few days, you will probably remember only one or two points. Imagine, if I write it and give you a print out - even after a year, pretty much everything I say will be there. Even if I don't give you the print out, even if I am only talking to you, writing it down is better, because we saw that it helps us sharpen our thinking. To talk clearly, I must first think clearly. And writing helps us to do that.

Third, writing helps us to persuade others. Many universities these days ask you to submit essays. Sometimes, when you apply, you have to fill in a column that asks you give reasons for application. Your getting into a college of your choice might depend on it. Later, when you are applying for jobs, the interviewer might ask you, "why should we hire you." Your getting a job will depend on how well you communicate. May be some of you will do a startup. And for that you will need money. Writing clearly, precisely about your own business and why others should invest in it, will help you get the money.

You might argue that you can do many of these things even without writing. You can record the conversation, you can shoot a video, you can even draw a graphic novel. But, the basic building blocks are the same. Even those who take movies, write down the script first - the story, the screenplay, the dialogue. They write it all down.

Let me summarise.

You have to focus on learning how to write an argumentative essay, not just to get good marks in your exam. That's also important. But it will also help you achieve success in life, because your thinking will become clear and precise, you will be able to communicate better, and you will be able to persuade others effectively.

Let's now get into the how of writing an argumentative essay.

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How to write an argumentative essay

We will first understand the broad structure of the essay, and see how to 'diverge' and 'converge' to write better.

Let's just pause and look at what I did so far. What I did without actually alerting you was to give an example of how you can structure an argumentative essay.

First, I spoke about a situation, that you are probably familiar with. (Getting what you want, just by asking)
Second, I introduced a problem that arises out of that situation. (We don't consciously think about how to persuade others; we don't sit down and draft an argument)
Third, I presented my thesis that addresses the issue. (You should develop those skills for three reasons)
Fourth, I expanded on those reasons in this format
  • Express the point
  • Expand it
  • Provide one or two Examples
Fifth, I summarised it - emphasising my thesis.

You can visualise it this way. (Click on the image to expand)

Structure is probably one of the most important things that you will ever learn in writing. You get it right, a lot of other things fall in place. It's good to be clear about the structure of your entire essay, and of the individual paragraphs. Once you have the structure in your head, you can write very fast.

But, writing itself involves two steps, and both are important.

The first is diverge, when you jot down all points for and against.
The second is converge, when you pick and choose good arguments - and get to actual job of writing.


With the structure in hand, we will be tempted to start writing as soon as we get the topic. But we have to stop ourselves, and spend some time on preparation.

It doesn't matter what the question is. Is it right to keep animals in a zoo? Is it right to eat non vegetarian food? Should we give alms to beggars on the road? Should we ban cars on the road once a week? Was demonetisation good or bad for the country? Should India unilaterally destroy its nuclear weapons capability? The question doesn't matter, because the process is the same.

For now, let's take a question from 2012 ICSE question paper. It reads: "Every home should adopt a pet animal. Express your views either for or against this statement."

Don't start writing your essay yet.

The first step is to diverge, to broaden your perspective, to develop empathy, and to see things from others' perspectives. There are many ways to do this. But let's focus on a simple method now.

What am I doing? I am writing!

Take a sheet of paper, draw a line in middle.

Now, imagine that you badly want a dog or a cat, and you have to persuade your parents to buy you one. Close your eyes, and feel the want. List down all the reasons that you can think of, that will help you make a case for it. At this point, don't worry about whether the reason is strong enough, good enough. Just keep writing. One thought might trigger other thought, write that down too.

After you have finished doing that, imagine that your brother wants a dog, but you don't want one. Close your eyes and experience the feeling. Tell yourself, "No, I don't want the dog". Then, list down all the reasons that you can think of, that will help your persuade your brother and your parents not to buy a dog.

Once you are done with it, you will have a list of arguments for and against.  Doing this is very, very, very important. Remember, what we explored earlier. We are learning this skill not to score points or to win debates. We are learning this skill to think more clearly, to communicate better and to persuade others to take some action. That comes with responsibility.

In my profession, journalism, we give a lot of importance to this phase. We call it reporting. During this phase we deliberately seek out different perspectives, go everywhere with a very open mind, listen to people like how our mothers listen to us. We take down notes very sincerely. We diverge.

You can spend days doing it, or hours or minutes - depending on the topic. In your exam, of course, you will only have a few minutes. That's fine too. If you practice well, you can do it very fast. If you practice really, really well, you can even do this in your head.

You might already have an opinion on whether to have a pet or not. You should take this exercise as an opportunity to think about the opposing arguments, and see if you can address them. It's an opportunity to develop empathy. See things from others perspective. You might disagree with what they say. That doesn't matter. But you should try and understand all sides of the arguments.

When you diverge, be open.
When you converge, imagine you are giving away prizes to the best ideas.


Now, you have already seen all the arguments, you decide on the stand you want to take. If you are not sure, just go by what your heart says.

Then, you pick up two or three arguments that you think are the strongest. State them. Think of examples, quotes, facts, data that will bolster the point. Try to summarise the strongest argument against your position, and think of an appropriate response.

Now you are all set to write them down.

When you write, keep it simple. Try to use short words, instead of long words. Try to use words that are easy to understand. Try not to use technical terms. If you have to use some, explain what it is. Give examples.

When you write, tell yourself you enjoy writing. Sometimes it might be hard. But remember you can enjoy hard things too. Climbing a mountain is hard. But some people enjoy doing it.

After you finish writing, edit. It's always a good idea to take a quick look at what you have written. Everyone makes grammatical and spelling errors. Everyone leaves out something important. Editing helps you to fix them. You can do it even during your exams. After you have finished all your answers, and if you still have time, go back, and fix whatever errors you might find.

Finally, ask for feedback. Share what you have written with your teachers, friends, parents, brothers, sisters. Ask them to tell you what they liked about it, and how they think it can be improved. Everyone - and I mean everyone - gets better with feedback. That's the way to improve.

If you practice it, doing it in your exam will be a cake walk. 

That's about it.

In conclusion
Sathya Sai Baba says, "education is not for a mere living, it's for life". We should not think of what we did as merely a way to score more marks in exam - or even as a way to write impressive essays and get into college or get a job or get funding for a startup sometime in the future.

We should think of this as a way to expand our mind, develop empathy, understand other people's perspectives. In the process, we will find that we have sharpened our intellect. It will of course help us perform better in the school.

But we should always remember that the education we are getting here is for life.

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